Breadcrumbs for the mind

My father just sent me this. He's Conservative, and talks the party line.  However, there are a ton of flaws in this. I want to formulate my commentary and send it back to my parents

I could use a bit of help with the word-smithing. my comments in red.
( what they sent me. comments inserted ).

the more I think about this, the angrier I get.  I have to walk away for the moment. more when I'm less steamed.